ily024 发表于 2008-2-26 02:08   全显示 1楼
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烟雨星痕(2008-2-26 19:01): 有效评分及评论（4）
评分：5
评委:ily024
评论:这个诗不押韵,七言诗讲究合辙押韵的,这个兄弟要注意呀!
不过写的也有可点之处,
鸿雁传情书不尽
落泪只为闻乡音
这俩句写的就很不错了,写出作者思乡之情,希望下次还能见到兄弟的大作!
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